October assessment learner response

WWW: There is clear potential here with a clear understanding of terminology and plenty o good points.


EBI: You must read and answer the question E.g Q5 is about placement
-You need to write more for the higher mark question (Q8 + 9)

Total = 13  = Grade 3

Q1)1/1
Q2)1/1
Q3)2/2
Q4)1/2
Q5)0/2
Q6)2/3
Q7)2/2
Q8)1/4
Q9)3/8

I missed out extra marks because i did not read the question clearly

My strongest question is that Q3 because i read the question correctly

My weakest question is Q5 this is because i did not read the question correctly.

Q9) The producers use children in their adverts in order is make the consumer think about the child in need, this may appeal to the consumer to help the child as the consumer may have a child at home and can feel how this child is suffering and has no luxuries that the consumer may have which the child may not. The use the child to build a sense of innocence and vulnerability which may appeal towards the consumers generosity.
The image is easily recognisable as the child lives in a poor area.

The image is quickly recognisable because it is associated with the third world countries as in the background it shows a village which seems to be in poverty as the houses are a sand colour so it means that it may have been made using mud as the country cannot afford cement or any type of building materials which may be expensive to the country, as this might be a third world country then the people or the country may not be able to afford clean water or the accessibility to toilets this can also be seen in the slogan of "dig toilets not graves" so in this case it talks about how people don't have to die towards germs and bacteria when they can prevent it by getting toilets.

Children are normally used in these kind of adverts to show the sympathy of what their condition is and how they are suffering because of that condition, if adults were used then the consumer would't normally feel sympathy for the adult as they can work, get jobs, earn money etc. and they can actually take care of them selves and they can manage what they do with their money so that they can afford clean water or many other products.