Tuesday, October 8, 2019

Blog feedback and Learner Response





WWW: Your Photoshop fruit bowl is excellent but otherwise I’m afraid there is not a lot to credit here. We need to use this as a wake-up call and start to put things right.

EBI: Firstly, you are STILL missing the Key Concepts film poster analysis despite repeated promises and your denotation and connotation analysis is unfinished. This shows a very concerning lack of organisation and care. In addition, I have serious concerns about your written work. Read the following:
2) What knowledge and skills do you hope to learn in Media?

the skill i wanna learn are phototshop 

3) What grade are you realistically hoping to achieve in Media?

7 to 9

Are you seriously suggesting that a 7-9 top grade student writes ‘the skill i wanna learn are phototshop’. You simply need to have higher standards than this.
Treat your blog as you would an exercise book – this means correct titles, using capital letters and writing in full, grammatically correct sentences. Secondly, you need to write in MUCH more depth and detail – pretty much every question you have answered so far is a single sentence. You need to seriously focus on this side of the course or you will find that you underachieve despite your technical skills.


LR: Complete the missing work urgently (you will have time to do this in Media detention). Reflect on your first month of Media. What do you feel is your strongest piece of work so far? What is your weakest? What specific skills or knowledge do you need to develop over the rest of the course? How can you improve the depth and detail of your media analysis?



my first month of media has been very shaky due to the lack of  homework and that is what to improve on


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